Critique on the Legend of Mangga

I feel concerned about the story because our parents are hard working for us. A long time ago there was a couple named Mang Pangga and Aling Manggita. They have children who are stubborn and lazy. Their father and mother don't know what to do because when they die who is gonna take care of them. So the children woke up and there was no food at the table so they keep on finding their parents but no matter how hard they try they can't find their parents then they saw a mysterious fruit so when taste the fruit it was sweet and delicious so then on they worked hard to reproduce the fruit and then on they decided to name the fruit and the fruit was named after their parent called mangga. The legend was took place in Zambales The positive point of the story is: To have something great you need to work hard for it.

Critique by: Jaide Sari